I’m having issues with a particular section of my writing assignment. That I kee

I’m having issues with a particular section of my writing assignment. That I keep getting sent back by my evaluator.
Evaluator states “Your submission provides a well-defined plan for a quality improvement project. Please review the comments below for some required revisions.”
“The work includes descriiptions of the quantitative and qualitative data that will be gathered for the focus areas of timeliness and staffing/workload. The response is incomplete, as data to be collected for the focus area of communication and collaboration is not evident.”
A1A. TYPES OF DATA GATHERED (Section that needs editing)